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A rain of petals.

One by one they drop.

And I think of him

as they hit the blacktop.

His smile, his laugh

How he was nice to me

How he still cared, even

when he broke my heart totally.

The last petal left

and my heart is dead taut.

As it drops to the floor, I realize

He loves me not.
©2008-2009 ~omfgawaffle
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T_T
I is sad.

~omfgawaffle.

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:iconryciera:
This is so sad! But at the same time, it's utterly beautiful! I love it!

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Please, Spay and Neuter your pets. :jackdirt:
:iconomfgawaffle:
thank you!

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When life hands you lemons, take them, cut them in half, and squirt them in other people's eyes.
:iconbunni-face679:
IM GONNA CRY LILY!!!!!
:iconomfgawaffle:
WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! T0T

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When life hands you lemons, take them, cut them in half, and squirt them in other people's eyes.
:iconmcrxchocolat:
taut....not...that is genius lili!!! this poem is so lovely!!


-love ya girl!!

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nanai tatai gousto ko tinapay!!
:iconomfgawaffle:
luv ya too!

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When life hands you lemons, take them, cut them in half, and squirt them in other people's eyes.

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